Thursday, April 22, 2010


here's a 'lil poem I made while at the beach:

Crashing and Crushing
Salty and Sandy
Low or in its woe
In calm or becoming costly

Palm trees encroach the waveline
Sunsets end their shine
Seaweed meets beach and entwine
The wet is oh so fine
As the tide comes up then goes on a decline

I pick up a shell and the sea becomes mine.

2 comments:

  1. Wow!! bravo! i love it, and oh that last line is brilliant. and sweetie you don't have to apologize for writing what you feel. it's all okay.
    love the poem and the photo too! well done.

    xx lori

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  2. thanks so much, noticed alot of errors though....hmmm will definitely look through my work thoroughly next time...my friend took this picture (jojo)
    so I wont take credit for that.
    I might just the deathstare from my mate
    ;-)
    hope all is well

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